四级内部笔记写作热点话题及逻辑结构

　II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构

　　Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点(general);

　　(2) 具体描述这个事物或者观点(或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。

　　Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象货问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句;

　　(2) 支持性的细节分论点(至少两点);

　　(3) 本段总结(可以省略)。

　　Paragraph 3: (1) 总结全文，定下结论(通常为我的对策或看法)。

　　四级作文试题2000年1月

　　Directions:

　　For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1. 上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多多种途径解决。

　　2. 哪种途径适合我(说明理由)。

　　How I Finance My College Education

　　How I Finance My College Education

　　第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点：

　　Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.

　　第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱

　　第二段主题句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.

　　第二段分写：

　　In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.

　　In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.

　　What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.

　　第三段：我所赞同的方法(阐述原因，为何不选其他的方法)。

　　Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.

　　For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.

　　For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.

　　In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.

　　Therefore /So /Hence,.....

　　使文章富有表现力的手段：

　　1、使用有难度的词汇;

　　2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子;

　　3、使用被动语态;

　　4、使用倒装句;(not only... but also...;only...)

　　5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。

　　绿化我们的城市

　　第一段：

　　近年来，随着工商业的迅猛发展，许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐，但是，认识到绿化城市也同样重要。